tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post541541155135852958..comments2023-09-22T08:06:12.813-04:00Comments on Becca Fitzpatrick: More Graphic Novel SketchesJennMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12861115419900790874noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-66183065761829252942011-05-16T23:08:40.587-04:002011-05-16T23:08:40.587-04:00these are defently better then the last versions b...these are defently better then the last versions but patch should DEFENTLY have darker hair, it has to be longer and MESSY. patch looks younger in this scetch and thats good he looked way older in the other versions. but his body features like his chest and legs i think should be a little more visible. patch doesnt have that "i dont care" relaxed look but hes supose to be a knockout and a bad boy so wheres the hat and crooked smirk? um... i dont wanna sound mean but this nora looks like marcie in vees body. noras supose to be the fit one. im not saying make her look anorexic but more anemic, like she is. she needs lighter hair, shes a redhead and her legs are supose to be her best features. but with the mini skirt she doesnt seem like the teen that lisens to chopin like becca said she was. these clothes are to trendy. her legs need to be way thinner and with skinnies and flats? and LONGER, her legs gotta be longer! miles long and like bar stools. but no heels, she doesnt wear them. noras tall, she doesnt need them anyway. she looks really young, to young to be in love with patch and more like marcie in that department. but i love the curls! it looks like real hair! but remember that nora does not like her curls! but she defently has them. i know itll never be perfect for everyone but this is what i thought needs to be done. and by the time i post this ill have 15 other things i wanna change. but thank you so much for putting up with us crazed fans, i know we can be really nerve racking but were trying to help. promise!makaylaraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983678065586348740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-1516362238975555672011-05-16T22:31:09.291-04:002011-05-16T22:31:09.291-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.makaylaraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10983678065586348740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-78428960236186136882011-05-16T20:43:08.971-04:002011-05-16T20:43:08.971-04:00That Patch complete matches the Patch I always see...That Patch complete matches the Patch I always see in his description XD I love it! :3 That Nora is okay except I see Nora in jeans. ;3Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01736396358822967950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-67322760804757352702011-05-10T02:40:59.382-04:002011-05-10T02:40:59.382-04:00Wow, I disagree a bit with Patch hair's.... I ...Wow, I disagree a bit with Patch hair's.... I don't know, maybe more dark and not that wavy?<br /><br />Nora... omg! curvy, sexy... mini skirt? Is Vee or Nora??? O_O<br />I'm pretty sure that Nora is more shy and plain, not that sexy bomb in high heels o__OKing Francohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02133473829791210550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-68896315256194219362011-05-08T08:33:29.499-04:002011-05-08T08:33:29.499-04:00Nora looks too childish here and Patch needs darke...Nora looks too childish here and Patch needs darker hair. I'm happy with the original Nora and Patch wearing leather jacket, but that one needs a bit more hair around his forehead.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02492844733495288307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-34790345149090593192011-05-06T19:49:26.061-04:002011-05-06T19:49:26.061-04:00I Really Like The revised versions of both Patch a...I Really Like The revised versions of both Patch and Nora!! :D There Getting There *biting nails,not literlly lol* Umm.. I would Say Patch's right boot is kinda bothering me right now haha its etheir a little too big because of the angle or b/c it's closer up to us OR its just the shine of it thats bothering me..Oh more majorly would be the hairstyle I guess. I like it but not digging it as much as I would of liked to..Actually I think I'm just so use to seeing Drew Doyon's Full And thickness of His Hair so I would go for a hairstyle like that.. and yeah thats all the constructive Critisism I can think of/give at the moment ;)-- Ps. Keep Up The GREAT Work Guys! ^.^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00752658300629166865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-74242229238893874912011-05-06T18:15:35.284-04:002011-05-06T18:15:35.284-04:00Nora is a little... showy in that drawing. And a l...Nora is a little... showy in that drawing. And a little too tall in my opinion.Shellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05825037414785205085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-30323785029084716492011-05-06T18:04:55.620-04:002011-05-06T18:04:55.620-04:00personal opinion, i do think these drawings are be...personal opinion, i do think these drawings are better than the others, but one slight issue, i think that Nora still looks a little too riskay.. she doesnt seem like the type of girl who'd wear an extreme mini skirt, anyone agree?<br />other than that i think Patch looks amazing! still curious on where that baseball cap is though, heh :)Mellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12693505010490153986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-28982757252646439932011-05-06T13:12:11.693-04:002011-05-06T13:12:11.693-04:00Nora is perfect. But I'm not sure about Patch....Nora is perfect. But I'm not sure about Patch.....hum...not hot enough, maybe?Giuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05217376330907431350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-24969404862878575462011-05-06T11:55:29.556-04:002011-05-06T11:55:29.556-04:00His hair his hair his hair! Oh blessed joy his hai...His hair his hair his hair! Oh blessed joy his hair!<br />Nora looks great, I love that she has CURVES! Boo ya!Ciarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07654625536270163632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-58229616502380026742011-05-05T13:51:51.830-04:002011-05-05T13:51:51.830-04:00Patch is quite similar to this picture of the Swed...Patch is quite similar to this picture of the Swedish artist Darin as Patch: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/045/8/b/Patch_Cipriano_by_BabyGirlFallenAngel.jpg<br /><br />I really liked Nora's sketch!Carolinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12937315508227721336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-29275680476260926952011-05-05T13:07:02.763-04:002011-05-05T13:07:02.763-04:00I love Patch's face but i think his haircut is...I love Patch's face but i think his haircut is not very trendy... i imagine an haircut more like Ashton Kutcher or Damon Salvatore's style. And BLACK! I would also have imagine him with a baggy jeans not a slim one. <br />Nora is georgous, face, hair, expression... But she looks a bit too lightly dressed. Especially the skirt... But unlike some people here, i think her legs are perfect... real girl legs! No Barbie legs! ;D<br /><br />xoxo from Switzerland<br />Alialihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06987885570682396955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-72341471740001400262011-05-05T11:06:34.473-04:002011-05-05T11:06:34.473-04:00Much better! I love these! Can't wait to read ...Much better! I love these! Can't wait to read the graphic novel AND Silence of course! :)Rena Tsukinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16875985674366514645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-44249474925199532362011-05-05T10:03:11.918-04:002011-05-05T10:03:11.918-04:00I think this Patch is is almost spot on - I think...I think this Patch is is almost spot on - I think his body properties are just right and he looks younger than the previous sketches. Nora not so sure about - I really like the earlier pictures - She needs to have much longer, slimmer legs as these were emphasised in the book - I think hair length is a good length but I always imagined her with sort of pre-Raphaelite curls (a bit like beccas) colour maybe a bit lighter - I think she has to have a fitter body - isn't she supposed to be slimmer? Not bothered about the clothes but she does seem to like Match stick jeans and ballet flats!lemoniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631770485574785044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-63803275734257673482011-05-05T08:39:10.296-04:002011-05-05T08:39:10.296-04:00I really like these! :D
Patch looks nearly perfect...I really like these! :D<br />Patch looks nearly perfect; all I would change is his hair (it looks kind of mullet-ish to me) Just make the front a little longer, and darken it all.<br />Nora's hair looks great! I am very happy with the way the artist has listened to all of us. You can really tell that they have taken all our comments into consideration with the changes that have been made.<br />Good job! :)kate.rox.4https://www.blogger.com/profile/06595237153033244999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-13360211498698824842011-05-05T05:36:20.066-04:002011-05-05T05:36:20.066-04:00Nora, I like. Patch, not so muchNora, I like. Patch, not so muchTulinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14466302343005335807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-27280759953019213802011-05-05T05:03:07.120-04:002011-05-05T05:03:07.120-04:00OMG! I love it! : D <3
Nora is very good except...OMG! I love it! : D <3<br />Nora is very good except her legs. I agree with the others, her legs are too short ... Patch's body is gorgeous! :D but his hair should be black and more messy.<br />/ RonjaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-18638205483577410072011-05-05T04:34:26.082-04:002011-05-05T04:34:26.082-04:00oh and pay no attention to the comments about his ...oh and pay no attention to the comments about his shoulders and upper body in general , this is very good , plz dont change it and thank you so much for the combat boots he looks super badass and sexy juts like he is supposed to beRulana Abidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06923060292074674533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-89040056265107358752011-05-05T04:29:35.161-04:002011-05-05T04:29:35.161-04:00great , absolutely perfect both nora and patch im ...great , absolutely perfect both nora and patch im rly rly glad , very good work , this is amazing extremely close to what i had in mind , but it would be better if his hair were a darker color and a version with his hat on would be much appreciated and nora is perfect in every possible way im very very satisfied , well done!Rulana Abidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06923060292074674533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-36645870573380431882011-05-04T23:25:50.636-04:002011-05-04T23:25:50.636-04:00Yay! Thank you for making Patch much younger! I lo...Yay! Thank you for making Patch much younger! I love it very much! :) One thing that still bothers me is the hair. I think Patch's hair is black (if I'm not mistaken)? And could you please make his hairdo as same as Drew Doyon's hairdo (the book cover's model)?<br /><br />And as for Nora, I LOVE HER!! She's cute!! I love the hair, it suits her perfectly and exactly as I've had imagined ;) But I think her legs need to be more slender. And her face, could you please make her more like a 16-year-old teen? She looks much younger. And I think the 'geek' beauty suits her well. She must seem smart, cute but not too beautiful, as in a 'geek' beauty. That's what I thought. <br /><br />But the rest is great! I love it so much!! Thank you for listening to our opinions! Love from Indonesia! :Dicha pratomohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00464417693121665235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-55996342364786644252011-05-04T23:18:33.505-04:002011-05-04T23:18:33.505-04:00I like Nora but I prefer the drawing of Patch in t...I like Nora but I prefer the drawing of Patch in the leather jacket. It just seems more...Patch. Plus, I drooled over the leather jacket version more than this one ;)<br />I'm so excited for the graphic novel!!!!!!!!Burning The Midnight Oilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08640634771004188429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-27995380089723230202011-05-04T22:59:06.596-04:002011-05-04T22:59:06.596-04:00Sincerely .. I do not like any! This one is too hu...Sincerely .. I do not like any! This one is too human.. a rude human.. and Pacth is an Angel! I do not like him in this sketch.-<br /> I prefer the 2nd sketch of Patch . Honestly(I gave my opinion before)I love the other Patch, with his finger in his pocket and that jacket!!THOSE EYES! JUST PERFECT! (that is my patch, the one in my mind ..)<br /> About Nora,I like her hair and her shoulders is perfect! but .. her legs omg NO!! she must be more skinny and tall...stronger I think! <br />I would like to see her wearing jeans and sneakers.. maybe?<br /> And I like a more marked Face, more sweet, curious, teen and expressive face..with big eyes and cute lips.. <br />(not with a huge forehead! This nora looks like a girl of 12 years old ..and if a see her with the second Patch.. she´s younger! )<br /> Should try to observe the teen girl on the Crescendo´s cover =) <br />MY HUMBLE OPINION!!<br /><br />I Love the Silence cover by the way!<br />xo<br />Yess from ArgentinaYesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922730154852929340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-84480301182602444302011-05-04T21:22:58.328-04:002011-05-04T21:22:58.328-04:00Nora is suuuuuuuper cute! (just a tad longer skirt...Nora is suuuuuuuper cute! (just a tad longer skirt). And patch is awesome!!!! Sooo much better than the others! Something about his face tho... Maybe the back hair too long? Hm but overall is amazing!!Kaylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14154580675005982496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-63153377311092564522011-05-04T21:03:22.720-04:002011-05-04T21:03:22.720-04:00I like this Patch so much more than the other!!! x...I like this Patch so much more than the other!!! xDElena Vladescuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03959320669746136184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-615208865042109487.post-34124926754413505772011-05-04T20:55:19.522-04:002011-05-04T20:55:19.522-04:00oh and I just want to thank the artist for putting...oh and I just want to thank the artist for putting so much time and effort into these sketches. Thank u soooooo much 4 taking our thoughts into consideration and making our characters come to life ;) I can't wait to see the graphic novel!!!Jaskirat@SeeitORreadithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12022969251689585678noreply@blogger.com